Wednesday, January 18, 2012

Spongebob: A Life Coach (Toastmasters 5th speech)

This is not a polished speech. Please give constructive criticism (a positive and a needs-work); I already know about the teeth sucking. Cringe. All strictly negative comments will be deleted. I'm trying to improve as a speaker. And, yes, the lighting where we are is horrible. The updated written speech (muuuuuuch better than this one) can be found here. Just read through the first few paragraphs of stalling and you'll find it. Thanks for visiting. Muah!

1 comment:

  1. I really like the Spongebob analogy. Its funny because sometimes you never realize life's little lessons; the medium to which you receive the lesson determines its validty society says but when has society ever been right. Its too busy trying to be politically correct that its living a lie. I think your presentation is both informative and entertaining and that is 2 of the 3 forms of a presentation (informative, pursuasive and entertaining) So now how will you deal with the pursuasive? That is more of a rhetorical question but something to think about. Otherwise, really good start plus your diction is nearly perfect!!